"Stories are the events in order of occurrence, where as plot is the order in which they are told to the audience. Narratives are about the structure of the text."
We then learnt about the different types of narrative, a linear narrative being the traditional order of a beginning, middle and end whereas a non-linear narrative is where the story is not in chronological order. We also learnt about restricted narratives, where the audience has limited access to narrative events as they only see what the characters see and omniscient narratives, where the audience has access to more narrative events and sometimes know more than the characters themselves. Most BSR films use an omniscient and linear narrative (because a non-linear narrative is not as realistic).
We decided that for our opening we would have a non-linear narrative as we wanted to include flashbacks but have the rest of the film as a linear narrative. We also decided we wanted to use an omniscient narrative as in our film idea the audience would know more than our main character.

An example of an omniscient narrative would be this clip from the film "Psycho." This clip shows the film to have an omniscient narrative as the audience are able to see the character approaching the shower without the other character knowing.

We learnt about Todorov who suggested that conventional narratives are structured in the following five stages:
1. A state of equilibrium at the beginning
2. Agents of change disrupting equilibrium
3. A recognition that there has been a disruption
4. Solution/Restored order
5. New equilibrium
We also constructed our own narrative structure based on Mckee's 'Classic Narrative Structure':
We added the above narrative structure to our treatment to explain our narrative stages clearer, and also added the following terminology we learnt to the paragraph about narrative in our treatment: omniscient, restricted, narrator, enigma code, action code, protagonist, antagonist, verisimilitude, linear and non-linear.
This week we had to consider how we were going to conduct our primary research. We looked at many different ways to collect information needed by our audience, written questionnaires, focus groups and vox-pops. We decided on using vox-pops to collect the information from our target audience, as it allows us to ask follow up questions and gather opinions and also allows us to present the information gathered in a more interesting way. Obtaining vox-pops should allow us to see a snapshot of our audience's opinion and provide us with enough information to see if our film is suitable for our target audience. We will approach people and ask them open, but simple questions ensuring that these people represent our audience. We will carry out our research next week and use questions that we constructed in advance. Our first question will tell us whether they are familiar with the genre our film will be by asking if they have seen some well known British Social Realism films, this should enable them to understand the common themes in realist films and makes their opinion on our storyline more valuable.
This week we also learnt about shooting scripts. A shooting script is used in the production process of the film to communicate important information needed by all crew and actors involved. It should include: - Dialogue
- Shot Type
- Shot Angle
- Duration of shot
- Shot Movement
- Music and Sound FX
- Lighting
- Description of Action
- Props/Equipment needed (costumes etc)
- Actors used in scene
- Shot Number
We carried out an exercise using a shooting script made by someone else and went and filmed it in one of our lessons. It made me realise the importance of a shooting script for 1. Filming, this exercise shows that a shooting script needs to show the exact details of the shot and what will happen and can be very useful if you do not film shots in chronological order. and 2. What is included in the shooting script needs to be clear, and easy to follow, but contain a lot of information. When I conduct my own shooting script I will remember this exercise and ensure that if I gave my shooting script to someone else to film it should look almost exactly like mine.
This is our version of the shooting script we were given:
Strengths of our work?
We followed the 180-degree rule when filming to try and keep continuity within our shots. We followed the shot types and angles, and used various different shots when the shot type was not specified. Also the setting and props was accurate to the information that was given.
Weaknesses of our work?
We were unable to follow the costumes as we were only given a lesson to film and because of this time frame were unable to finish the sequence. We were filming with tape and this was a new experience for us and some shots were lost when it was converted onto the computer so the beginning is missing. A big weakness of our work is that we were unable to stay in character as you can see in the clip. The main weakness however, is the confusion about the shooting script. The shooting script given to us used the character's name and actor's name inconsistently throughout the description of action in different shots, so after filming some shots, we realised it was one person not two, but could not go back and film so there is a jump cut as we did not have continuity as one character had to change positions completely. Eoin is seen sitting, and then being the one at the door. This made us realise that our shooting script needs to be written carefully and made easy to understand.